Monday, July 6, 2009

And The River Cried Comments

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And the River Cried

U wrote to me and I replied
We became friends, that’s the start
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Mae Ethan
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Danny H 06 July 2009

I cried a tear… I cried a river… Tears of regret… Tears that made me shiver… No words can ever console a heart that’s bitter Now, finally, I know that it is all over…. That phrase was filled with so much pain and remorse. Enlightenment on it ending was extremely deserted, it was ended in such a flash that you had no time to cry until it was officialy over: this was very beautiful and from the heart

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