He placed
deep red ruby gems
upon my lips.
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This is a very vivid compact religious? poem about God and my interpretation would be communion with God given the personification of the wine. You have a way with carefully using your words, not wasting anything. Well done! :)
How vivid. This short but powerful poem fills the mind with much visual stimulation - much to think and reflect on. Gorgeous. Thanks!
Tantalizing is my tongue! ! ! Thanks for sharing.