Saturday, February 9, 2013

And The Ocean Created A Man Comments

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When the whims to ‘feel', swam in ocean's streams
An amoeba sprang from it, just to roll and dream.

When a wish to swim, surfed on his azure heart
His womb gorged out, fishes, reptiles and sharks.
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Dr Hitesh Sheth
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Jazib Kamalvi 14 July 2019

Wow! Great poetry, Dr. Hitesh. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Payal Parande 13 September 2013

beautifully crafted piece..amazing words and brilliant pinning great sir

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Nasarudheen Parameswaran 11 September 2013

A well knitted poem in content and form.

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Shahzia Batool 17 May 2013

deep poem with a melodramatic element and a vision! ! !

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Gajanan Mishra 09 February 2013

The birds flew to circle the sky in bliss. good one. I invite you tom read my poems and comment.

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