Friday, February 5, 2016

And, The Nurses Smile Comments

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They come to work in pastel uniforms
And, greet their patients with their brightest smile.
They meet, and know, each patient by his name
And, bring to this most cheerless place a warmth
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Lynn W. Petty
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Bri Edwards 25 September 2016

favorite lines so far: as Chemo drips through needle-fangs from snake like tubes Upon he faces of the patients, young............don't forget to cross the t's and dot the i's. oops. need one more t, sir! :) :) does its devil-dance, ............loving the alliteration, if not the circumstances around it. no, definitely not. a touching (though i shy away from that word; it's really not me!) and beautifully-flowing poem, not unlike the medication flowing through snake-like tubes. to MyPoemList. thanks, Lynn. bri :)

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Lynn W. Petty

Lynn W. Petty

Newport Beach, California
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