Friday, February 13, 2015

And The Cute Was Dead Comments

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The Bad time never informs us of arrival,
Sometimes we become so much care less,
Particularly in a house where there are the kids,
We need to be more than careful my friends,
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Khalid Saifullah
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Me Poet Yeps Poet 13 September 2018

sad but many mothers are careless as they can't visualise what can happen do read my two poems moms smiles and mothers day today u will recall

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Susan Williams 30 July 2018

This is a valuable write- we forget what we use so much and we must not forget or we shall lose a lovely child. Valuable write. I liked your creative use of The Cute as a way to describe as well as name the child. These children could and should be called The Cute! Excellent word choice.

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Susan Williams 30 July 2018

It is a wonder that more children do not die from household accidents- as best as Mothers and Fathers watch over them, they always find that timy crack in our protectiveness- - I was fortunate that my children survived their behavior- -yet they still roll their eyes when remembering how protective I was [they called it overly-protective! ! ! ]

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 24 April 2018

A poignant write with great message. A very thoughtful poem.

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Bri Edwards 06 January 2018

well, normally i would not use cute as a noun as you seem to have done. but poetic license is useful. and it The Cute Was DID help catch my attention. bri :)

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Bri Edwards 06 January 2018

i 'could not resist' the title. Sometimes we become so much care less, ....i would use careless here. a couple other minor suggestions i will not bother you with now. a fair warning to all readers re 'kids and electricity'! ! ! ! bri :)

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Umar Hashmi 30 November 2015

A nice advice.............................

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 01 August 2015

Truly, carelessness is a sign of danger mongering near.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 05 May 2015

Yeah we heard this too. Tragic! It's great n sympathetic of u to record it in a well written poem. So evryone wil be careful. Pls do coment my latest poem too.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 14 April 2015

The Bad time never informs us of arrival, Sometimes we become so much care less, ... s lovely..10 think not about bad and feel sad it is part of our existence and shall remain at variance

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Kavya . 03 March 2015

yeah heard of this instance recently n it sent shivers in my spine....yes some things go un-noticed and are totally un-intentional....to become the reason for taking away the life of a toddler

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Valsa George 27 February 2015

So sad.... We never anticipate such a thing! Let this poem help parents to take sufficient precaution! A moving write!

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Salini Nair 15 February 2015

The Bad time never informs us of arrival, Sometimes we become so much care less, ...a reminder for all...nice

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Akhtar Jawad 14 February 2015

A great message.........................10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 14 February 2015

It is very sad poem having a warning to young mass to maintain discipline. Beautiful composition.

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