Thursday, May 8, 2014

And Still You Are Not Here Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sun has rose and set, and you are still not here,
Outside in a world.
A world I've no idea.
Is the sun brighter out there, or the meadow greener?
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Wenjun Liu
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Susan Lacovara 08 May 2014

You should fully developed this story, as I am certain it would have a following. Quite creative, with a unique tale to be unfolded. Very much enjoyed....tell me, will the brother return on time? You have me hooked! PEACE

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