And Still The World Spins Comments

I like this poem too, give you 10 also. Great metaphors, forward moving sensory footsteps. Wonderful job. Adeline

The movement of time is as sure as the movement of shadows or the rising and setting of the sun. Cheers for your rich imagination. A very original mind is at work here. Warm regards, Sandra

I like this poem give you 10. best wishes suzan

great poem and I love the line'i'm alone now says the heavy thickened silence'