Sunday, May 13, 2012

And Still She Cries Comments

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And still she cries,
dry tears.
no longer moist
and salty.
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Juan Olivarez
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Heather Wilson 30 May 2012

Tears of the earth, dry tears, I`m sure they are, there is so much sorrow around our world, so well said in your poem Juan.

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 24 May 2012

Awesomely portrayed and amazing flow on this wonderful poem! Rational leaders are leading the world astray, all these hypocrites are just power hungry and careless about the mother and her children. Siya_! !

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Valerie Dohren 15 May 2012

Mother nature does indeed cry tears of powder and dust in places where there is no water. Very well written.

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Indira Babbellapati 15 May 2012

i look at this poem as written about the pathetic mother-earth who has no alternative but to simply sheds dry tears as her rivers go drier...

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