Thursday, May 25, 2006

And Still, Eagles Fly High Comments

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“Think before you cast
Me into that cerulean sea”, she cried…
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Debora Short
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Not a member No 4 24 May 2007

I see some very interesting and realistic angles on in this. A subtle unity of particulars and universals, all held within very disciplined writing indeed! xx jim

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Joseph Daly 08 June 2006

A lovely piece Debora. I like that it narrates what we call nature. Yet the question brings us back from a sort of pastoral vision, i enjoy the form of this especially the manner in which the stanza are shaped. the final line, for me, acts as a uniting force for the piece

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