When love flows between two yearning hearts,
Even Gods and angels listen,
As softly silence speaks,
And softly silence speaks.....
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Kairul, I'll try to put this in my next 'showcase'. bri ;) I like it! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
What a magnificent romantic poem! Thoroughly enjoyed the fascinating expression... each stanza has some substance to ponder on...a fabulous title... appreciated and admired. Top score
A beautiful well thought out poem to captivate all lover's hearts. A poem that you don't want to end just to keep flowing and unwinding before your enthralled eyes. Five shining stars and gratefully bestowed to you good sir. I thank you for sharing and I thank you for writing a poem unique. A treasure I'm glad to find. Take care and enjoy life.
The great title and the recurring lines " And Softly Silence Speaks" enhanced the beauty of this write and made the same powerful by emphasizing the magic and power of love. A poetic gem. Five Stars and to my Poem List.
What a marvelous and heartwarming poem. Beautifully crafted and well executed and so mellifluous when read. Its superb imagery makes a reader at close range with the lovers/ two yearning hearts.
Most beautiful...i love the voice of silence. Thank you very much for sharing.
'When love flows between two yearning hearts, Even Gods and angels listen, As softly silence speaks, And softly silence speaks.....' I loved every stanza from Gods and angels listening to song and a stroll, also loved the way you repeatedly tied the title into every stanza, because the title is in the last line of every stanza, beautiful
Silence is golden. A beautiful love poem that would make a great song!
a beautifu " When the lovers take a moonlight stroll, And discuss their secrets in rapt attention, Even the crickets stop their evening song, As softly silence speaks, they stroll along! "
And Softly Silence Speaks, I like this alliteration very much, dear poet. Cutest clearly composed composition!
@@Sylvia Frances Chan, 'Cutest clearly composed composition! ' - Glad, glad and glad to have this compliment! Thanks a lot, dear poetess. Happy writing!
Such a loveliest poem and that created in 2013! I am mesmerized by the captivating words you created, Khairul Sir. Even Gods and angels listen. WOW! Fascinating poetry that speaks to my heart, dear poet! 5 Stars and to MyPoemList.
@Sylvia Frances Chan, Thanks for the honour of picking this humble poem of mine to your 'MyPoemList'. It's such a delight to have an appreciative comment like this and such a generous appraisal!
2 - Or is such a duo only of poems and romantic movies/novels? ? bri :) p.s. i don't care much for love poems and rarely have written one, if ever. But, to MyPoemList
1 - i like: " Even the lapping sound slowly ceases, " Is the river listening, watching, holding its breathe? " As softly silence speaks" is a bit of a mystery to me, but...i like the poem. Is there such a " duo" on this Earth. And, if so, will they remain as such if they marry, have a home, and maybe kids, bills to pay, etc.? (cont.)
Beautiful poem about love. I have fallen in love with the way you write.
@Deluke Muwanigwa, 'I have fallen in love with the way you write.' - Thank you so much for this great appreciation. Much inspired by your kind comment.
Thank you, dear poet @Philo Yan, for reading and appreciating the poem. Much obliged by your kind words.
Absolutely Breathtaking, and ever so beautifully moving! .. Thank you ever so much for sharing this! .. Ever so very many 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ..............+++++
Thank you Rebecca for reading this old piece of my poetry. Much obliged, much inspired by your appreciative comment and generous rating. Just read your poem you wrote for Sandra Feldman. So nice!
The imagery is beautiful. Very romantic. There's a certain purity in the poem too...
Thanks for visiting my poems. Much inspired by your kind and thoughtful comment, @Bipasha D.
When the loving duo sit in the dark woods, The nocturnal birds and animals listen, Their whispers travel miles away, As softly silence speaks....loved the expression. A magnificent piece of work!