And So We Take The Twisted Path To Town Comments

Ben- this one i like much better. also the title of the one in which the moon turns to stone...more reality but still a wistful longing. good. bernie

A poem deep with meaning, lovely to read. A real pleasure.

Very nice, Ben. Love the title. Don

Good writing skills. You have a such a great style of writing, while I read this piece it's as if you were reciting the words before me. Great imagery.

I really like this one Ben... it's from the heart

Very nice lyrical write. I love your titles. They are very original. Kindest regards, Sandra