Tuesday, June 19, 2012

And So The River Flows Comments

Rating: 2.0

Sometimes I don't know what to think
sometimes I don't know what to feel
does the river know where to flow,
not always, it seems to travel
...
Read full text

Kasia Fedyk
COMMENTS
Avik Datta Gupta 04 August 2012

Poetic mist glowing The water flowing The endless river Forever and ever.......

0 0 Reply
Marcus Mckinley 03 July 2012

life is a rivers journey until it meets its ocean. and then there are truly no limits or boundaries to its greatness. nicely written

0 0 Reply
Jay Aguiniga 02 July 2012

I like this write. Life is so very much like flowing water, carving and marking as it journeys forward. Thank you for sharing.

0 0 Reply
Swetha Vanakayalapati 22 June 2012

what do I become? The journey begins. these lines carry much of the gist! !

0 0 Reply
Unwritten Soul 20 June 2012

Your poem flows as a river, never look back but keep on moving one and makes us move on with smiles...Sometimes we dont have to think much or get bothered with things in front...just keep on flows... and never turn back...and times will show us where will we go...sooner_Unwritten Soul

0 0 Reply
Asif Andalib 20 June 2012

Yeah our life is like a flowing river! Nice poem, Thanks for sharing

0 0 Reply
Close
Error Success