And So It Happened Comments

Well articulated and nicely crafted in persuasive expressions with conviction. An interesting story written with insight.

“fall eight times, rise the night“. Well crafted with a folklore suited into our existence.

Nice piece

And who knows just may be He will find love again It never happened before But the lion king cried who will clean his tears? Who? " An unpredictable and amusing conclusion of the story poem. Congrats on POTD.

Losing one’s vigor and vitality is a difficult thing to swallow! Wise words shared through the story of lion king, most powerful of all. Congratulations for a poem written with style.

'And just suddenly Her heart belongs to another But how can he fight When he is disadvantaged How can he fight When he is seen as a weakling He had lost his pride '.. with sudden twist to the story you have made it very interesting. Nice poem. Congrats.

Far from thence! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

And who knows, just maybe He will find love again It never happened before But the Lion King cried Who will clean his tears? Who? a very fine poem my dear poet. conquering the heart. tony

fighting for the love conquers the heart of observer..........//// beautiful poem penned

Typos: Please read as: specific. I vote this wonderful poem with a 10

I could see the cloud/Far from thence/This mystery we must solve/A puzzle we must demystify......your thoughtful expression has the power to move from specif to generic dispensing valid substances for speculation! Many congratulations for this insightful piece of work being chosen as Poem of the Day!

A well crafted lovely poem of the day. Congrats, Babatunde for being selected.......10+++++++++

it is not by strength He has lost his Queen The Queen of his heart lost love lost love great 10++++++++++++++++++++++