And So I Write Comments
And so I write on my pages today
A list of things that I might say
Of lessons in life, love, change and dismay
A couple of months and a few days away
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I like this, you do loose the rythem a bit near the end, but the idea is great, and a good effort too.
Asmidgen awkward, you can do this better. Listen to some rhythm first (music) then look at her, wanting to please her, show her, not your appendages, no your soul. All it takes. H
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7/21/2025 11:54:06 AM # 1.0.0
nice keep on writing Warren. enjoyed the read