And She Thinks Of Her Beloved Comments

winter freezes her beating chest and blur dwells in her eyes and face her life runs in those endless loops of memories entwined in time and space superb expression great 10+++++++++++++++++++++++++

A lovely and very sad poem. I almost shed a tear as I read the last lines.

Lovely thinking, lovely poem.

You have described tears from another's heart. So well done

I'm speechless with the sheer magnetism of your beautiful lines and with such charming details with the truth that love is eternal! ! Superb write! !

Wonderful, to say the least. A beautiful description in honest words.

A poignant and moving poem. It seems that loss makes for a deeper and more profound topic. This is very good from any angle of judging.A great final stanza-10

very nice read in a while...........excellent poem with true emotions

Pat Northall You reach the essence of losing one's life source Loss of Love, the meaning of life, of the simple ease of breathing. A beautiful deep understanding woven in the lines When love and trust and vows were real....

Really lovely poem Kanav, very well written with superb flow. Enjoyed reading very much. Well done.

i didn't know so much sadness could be magnified in one poem very touching thank you

Poignant and touchin love sad. The creativity is novel and noteworthy here, wow. In hindi, sunder sad. Oops forgot what's sad in hindi.

As the greatest leveller, death has His own significance.. But in your poem there is a feel of loss that amounts to breaking the acceptance of a poetic convention. A touching poem, Kanav.

A beautiful poem. Tender emotions expressed so well. Loved the losing with so many other great lines. Her life runs in those endless loops.......Thanks for sharing and thank you so much for commenting on my poem.

Kanav a wonderful poem from your pen.True love in hearts forever reign - - - - - - - - -very true!

her life runs in those endless loops of memories entwined in time and space Of course bereavement hit us like an avalanche. But the fact is that each of your lines have such a majestic touch. Enjoyed each of it like a sweet rasgulla! 10/10

her life runs in those endless loops of memories entwined in time and space The bereavement of a relative, lover, friend or for that matter anyone close to our heart of course is an emotional avalanche. Though the theme of the poem is melancholic, your style of narration is majestic.10/10

I absolutely love the close of your poem...like a flower you never want to see wilt. PEACE

when trust and love and vows were real why death it proudly came between but death be not so proud and pleased true love in hearts forever reign......great lines, one of my fav poems now, great write Kanav...lovely

Pangs of pain over unfortunate separation very poignantly expressed...........very touching indeed......Kanav.........