Thursday, April 23, 2009

And She Gifted Me Death! ! Comments

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as the wings of pain flared up high...
and the shallow started to shake the perfroration from inside, ,
and i cud not no longer suffer..
it was time i called her...
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Shagun Khera
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Sara Beloved 23 July 2009

I really like these two lines: and then i looked into her eyes, , , while she helped me die... i drank death..while she kissed me goodbye... they just have something to them.... the whole poem is wonderful

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Priyanka Bhowmick 25 May 2009

itz really touching. wonderfully penned down. well written.10

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Neha Aradhye 11 May 2009

that touched my heart.......beautiful write, dude! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! i just loved-loved it....... Wonderful- for dying once in her arms... and then i looked into her eyes, , , while she helped me die... i drank death..while she kissed me goodbye...

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