Saturday, December 22, 2007

And Santa Got Stuck In The Chimney Comments

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It was Christmas Eve
and across the rooftops,
he flew, popping down chimneys here and there
delivering presents and good cheer.
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David Harris
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Alison Cassidy 29 December 2007

David, this one reminds me of the time Pooh Bear got stuck in Rabbit's Front Door. His solution, if you remember, was to 'wait to get thin again'. Perhaps old Santa might think about giving Weight Watchers' a ring. Fun poem. love, Allie xxxx

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JoAnn McGrath 22 December 2007

Duncan beat me to it....I think this would make a wonderful childrens book...: O)

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Duncan Wyllie 22 December 2007

Ah David trying the old hand at story telling here me-thinks, the Kids would love this one Take care David Love duncan X

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Risha : Ahmed 22 December 2007

David..this is one wonderful poem on Christmas eve. Beautiful.

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I don't know what's the matter with me. I read the fourth line as 'delivering presents and good beer'. Er, anyway. A wonderful one to you and Vera sweetheart. Look forward to seeing you in the next year! t x

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