And Reach The Heaven! Comments

Weak clouds shadow the mighty Sun Seem to the children as pretty fun Weak is not weak, timid not timid If efforts are made to change and change vivid In the dog days of sunny summer Thunder and lightning trumpet as a drummer Visit of clouds that bring breeze and shower Relieve the earth of heat with power! You have used such beauiful imagery in this poem. Reading it felt like meditation. My mind felt at peace after I finished reading te entire poem.

Up, up, up in the sky Soar, soar, soar so high Over the hills and trees with joy and ease And reach the Heaven with Divine grace! ...it is always lovely to share the views with your brilliant thoughts....10 read mine making sense.... still breathing

fly us with your shining words to Seventh Heaven, brother! very gorgeous! !

ethereal verses filled with celestial wonder.

a poem soaring with heavenly bliss...

Would you have any suggestions of an Indian poet I should look into? Please let me know. Thanks! My email is duynh@yahoo.com