Friday, December 20, 2019

And Other Signs Of The End Times. Comments

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a murder of crows rising against the sky
while I am pumping gas into the car
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Susan Williams 20 November 2020

Kim, I have to go read this poem! ! ! !

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Kim Barney 08 November 2020

Didn't you used to have another poem with the title " A Murder of Crows" ? Or is this the one I am thinking of? Did you change the title? Or am I just senile?

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Kim Barney 09 November 2020

Ha! I found it! The other poem is called Uneasy Murder of Crows. It has inspired another poem by me called Thinking of Susan Williams.

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Susan Williams 10 August 2020

Hey there, Robert, that was a very clever comment! ! ! ! Reading your poetry requires no thanks from you- I do the thanking! ! !

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Mj Lemon 19 June 2020

This is perfect for reading at Christmas. A perfect 10...and to my favourites. I am struck by the imagery of the children. I think this poem can address the very young, and the child within. Each one of those children might have a rather different response to both darkness and light. Superb verse, Susan.

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Susan Williams 21 June 2020

Thank you for always delving deep and responding even deeper- you make me want to write better

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Valsa George 09 April 2020

All the countries stay baffled and bewildered before a microscopic virus and man is rendered so helpless. Truly we all doubt if it is the prelude to an apocalypse. As you have stated in the concluding lines.... the only possible solution is to look up to the Heavenly light. A wonderful poem that reflects some of the highly annoying signs of the times. Top marks.

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Susan Williams 12 May 2020

Thank you for delving deep in your comments- the world wouldn't be in such a mess if there were more like you- -especially in government!

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Valsa George 09 April 2020

This poem becomes so relevant in the time of the fast spread of the pandemic. The present pestilence can be in one way seen as Nature's retaliation to the reckless exploitation of Nature, the escalating pollution and the unprecedented rise in crimes and cruelty! It spares none, the good and the bad, the rich and the poor!

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Susan Williams 12 May 2020

Wise words, Valsa. There is a patch of blue skies in this pandemic- literally! People are driving so much less that the air quality in cities such as L.A. has so improved that the smog is gone- -though with the reopening of businesses, the smog will return as will the virus. It is an especially cruel virus but I pray it spares those we love. Stay safe, my friend

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Savita Tyagi 25 February 2020

There are signs everywhere.... But nothing is more tragic than to watch the murder of a crow or the crushing death of a squirrel.......blow after blow keeps coming to them and our peacefull world falls apart. Thank you Susan for invoking the emotions of love and compassion with your wonderful poem.

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Susan Williams 27 February 2020

Thank you, my faithful and encouraging friend, there does not seem to be peace anywhere on the planet and if I were not old I would be so very frightened

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Smoky Hoss 01 February 2020

Murder-rising, such vivid imagery. Peace, is the answer... is mercy.

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Susan Williams 09 February 2020

Smoky Hoss, you are absolutely right. Peace is the answer and the pathway to peace is mercy. Thank you for feeling this poem

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Seamus O Brian 21 January 2020

HI, Susan! Stopped by to see if any of my old acquaintances here were still writing, and very pleased to find your recent piece. It is beautiful and poignant and certainly timely. I, too, take consolation that even our ecological and sociological collapse is all part of a greater blueprint that rests safely in capable hands. Beautifully expressed here. All the best my friend, for a blessed and inspired 2020. Seamus

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Susan Williams 27 January 2020

God bless you and keep you this year and all years to come, Your comment, as always, rivals in richness and beauty the poem it critiques. Come back, come back, PH needs its greatest poets!

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Glen Kappy 15 January 2020

Grim and cause to sing hymns—such is life, eh, Susan? Keep your humor helped by a sweeping perspective. -Glen

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Susan Williams 17 January 2020

Thank you for reading and giving it a good thinking over!

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Susan Williams 07 January 2020

Again PH sends me a notification that someone had left a comment but when I get here, it is not here- so the person who wrote it thinks I am so full of myself I do not bother to reply - -here is the notification and I hope the author sees I do not know who he is: Dec 20,2019,4: 42 PM- -You have a new comment about your poem: And Other Signs Of The End Times.- A wonderful poem with great images. No matter what is coming we can look forward to Christmas, at least.

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Edward Kofi Louis 01 January 2020

Times are changing! ! Facing the End! ! ! Disasters! News of Wars. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Susan Williams 05 January 2020

I am so glad you came and read it, Edward

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Muhammad Ali 22 December 2019

End of times. Sure, it will happen (happens, being timeless) . We should not be hopeless, but prepared. ... End of times. With every forced end of a life, I feel, I think, an end of a living world. Yes, entropy is natural, and we should not help it fast. This poem is very impressionable. True emotions and feelings.

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Susan Williams 05 January 2020

Thank you for reading this and delving deep and then sharing your learned thoughts

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Unnikrishnan E S 22 December 2019

Human race has transcended all limits and encroached into all the vaults where nature has kept its most valuable treasures. Wealth is getting accumulated by a few persons, who get all protection from the system. People are persecuted in their own land, in the name of religion, caste or creed. And the rich countries refuse the refugees. Refugees, including women and children are left to die in the seas. Wonderful poem. On the contemporary issues.

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Susan Williams 05 January 2020

Thank you for joining into the spirit of this poem but then again you always do.

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