And Now That You Are Deceased Comments

I am also dead since you left. It shows the depth of your sorrow and your concern for him.

A touching description of feelings on the death of a beloved friend........................10

Amazing poem, you begin talking about the death of a beloved friend, their qualities, their strength. As your poem progresses, your imagery turns to nature and how it now seems to not be the same. Your sadness then gets more pronounced telling what is happening to your self, everything bugs or annoys you, being petrified. Finally resigning self to a life dead within, seeing no future any more. This continual spiral taking the reader into depths of your sorrow, hearts gripped by your abandonment. Eloquently, silently, slipping with you into death's arms. So very poignant and heart-breaking, yet so brilliantly stated. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn