Saturday, July 20, 2019

And Now At Last I'll Set You Free Comments

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The world is made up of fools
Who just don't have the tools
To make it... like me.
Can't you see?
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Noah Body
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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 05 August 2019

Aw letting go is hard but this poem is expressed wonderfully and awesomely and I feel many can relate to this with break ups after long term together times. Kudos for this superbly rhymed poem that should help u move on and find fresh new love.. Pls pleez do comment/ review my newest poem too titled, " The Hajj pilgrimage "

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Jazib Kamalvi 03 August 2019

A refined poetic imagination, Noah Body. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Lyn Paul 01 August 2019

So beautifully penned yet read with sadness. So important as hard as it is to now move forward. Life changes so much for us all and I believe it is mapped out. For a child of mine now has a fabulous bond with the stepchild. Let life now take you to where you are meant to be. Find you Tony and start enjoying a real life, We don't have much time left at this age. Keep smiling.

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Tony Karas 03 August 2019

Thank you my friend, I am glad for that child of yours.

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Rinshi Ansari 21 July 2019

Aww! That's painful, my friend. Hugs.

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Tony Karas 03 August 2019

Thank you my friend.

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