Friday, August 21, 2009

' And Never The Twain Shall Meet Comments

Rating: 2.8

I can't believe you're wearing that!
Your favorite holey shirt,
Your kneeless jeans and sandals
And you've got the guts to flirt!
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Linda Ori
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Adeline Foster 24 May 2013

Great poem with a great theme. Here it is four years later and that 'holey' still brings a smile because sure enough the holes are still showing. Read mine - Brier Fever - Adeline

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But who taught you to dress like that? ? ? ? Certainly not your mother! Linda loved the poem and esp the finale :)

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Nikunj Sharma 24 August 2009

A wonderful poem, very different indeed.bringing out the aspects of venus/mars behaviour...I liked it. Jus check out the spelling in HOLEY, should it be holy? 10 from me..read mine called Let her not sacrifice anymore...and rate it

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Ramesh T A 21 August 2009

Opposite sexes like the positive and negative ions attract each other is quite natural and that is why cool and hot have to embrace each other to neutralize for better union in life! Nice to read!

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 21 August 2009

Get a load o' Donna Keran would ya, now! LOL! I like this, Midnight, and the jeans & sandals, i'll agree to change...but a good Roman Catholic never tosses a Hol(e) y shirt! I knew this would happen when you renewed your subscription to VOGUE! FjR

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Daniel Kempson 21 August 2009

Great write Linda, me thinks looking smart is out of fashion 10 Daniel

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Marieta Maglas 21 August 2009

A wonderful poem which clearly and accurately describes the fundamental relationship between a man and a woman...........10++++

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