Monday, November 23, 2015

And My Heart Is Still Crying… Comments

Rating: 5.0

You left me
with a purpose to accomplish
I know not
which way to proceed and replenish
...
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M. Asim Nehal
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Deepak S S 20 October 2020

And I’m unable to come out of your breathless impasse And my heart is still crying To get you back.

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Rajnish Manga 02 January 2017

So emotional and so humane. Loss of someone you love is not easy to forget. Great poem. My sentiments are swinging / like a pendulum egoistic battle is on / between heart and mind

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Edward Kofi Louis 30 June 2016

Love and pain! However, hope lies ahead. Thanks for sharing.

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Nishi Kumari 16 January 2016

Where there is love..there is fear of loosing...and where there is loss....there is pain...nice share

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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 November 2015

Leaving with purpose of accomplish is very amazing in this nicely drafted poem shared. From worldly things we hold morality of life. Nice sharing.....10

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Ari Alsio 23 November 2015

when the duck to sail must disappoint to keep the stern big sigh the beach

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Darren Jkoeryo 23 November 2015

Heartfelt poetry, In life such mishaps happens take it as they come, man. Very effective writing.

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Kelly Kurt 23 November 2015

Loss of love is one of the most painful things a person ever has to deal with. Nicely written, Mohammed. Thanks

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T Rajan Evol 23 November 2015

Fantastic poem Asim, God bless you.

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Rahman Henry 23 November 2015

Awesome love poem, wonderfully illustrated.....10++++++++++

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Jaishree Nair 23 November 2015

A nice drop .thanks

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