It's a nice evocation.
I felt some small tinge of pride at my recognition of the source of your title.
The character of Jonah rings true to me.
There are a few things I'd have to look up, to grasp a few of your references.
(I dont' consider that a flaw of the poem.)
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It's a nice evocation. I felt some small tinge of pride at my recognition of the source of your title. The character of Jonah rings true to me. There are a few things I'd have to look up, to grasp a few of your references. (I dont' consider that a flaw of the poem.)