Hmm. This poem is very good. It is only the second one I've read and I already know you are a great writer. Therefore, you have much potential.
I'll probably find the answer to this enquiry as I read on, but have you tried writing without rhyming? I think you'd be good at it. But what do I know?
Thanks for sharing.
Sorry if I seem too abrasive. I'm just honest... not to cause offence.
Anyway, sigues escribiendo!
þakka þér!
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Hmm. This poem is very good. It is only the second one I've read and I already know you are a great writer. Therefore, you have much potential. I'll probably find the answer to this enquiry as I read on, but have you tried writing without rhyming? I think you'd be good at it. But what do I know? Thanks for sharing. Sorry if I seem too abrasive. I'm just honest... not to cause offence. Anyway, sigues escribiendo! þakka þér!