Saturday, September 22, 2007

And Many Moons... Comments

Rating: 5.0

I recited your unknown name quietly to myself
Unknowingly yet surely your presence filling me
Gripped by the myriad duties of life as time flew on
Gifted to me the unwavering certainty which you are
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Saadat Tahir 29 September 2009

vivid color full and charming very nice cheers

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Kesav Easwaran 21 September 2008

love opting out to remain devotional silent...good poetry...the fourth stanza lines bear class...ten for you, Rishi

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Aasiq the poet 18 April 2008

a vy pleasant experience reading this poem of yours..

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rajagopal haran 29 January 2008

lovely write; touching

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Lawrence Beck 22 September 2007

I don't know what else to say, except that this is an excellent poem. It's beautiful. I greatly enjoyed it. Larry Beck

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 22 September 2007

So beautiful Rishi...10

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