Monday, November 9, 2009

**and Life With You No Words To Say** Comments

Rating: 2.9

Sharing my life with you
hands in one and words together
in pasted lips inhaling warm breath
you are my half, a friend, and life
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lily peace lago every by to ph
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Noel Horlanda 17 November 2009

this piece is full of romance and love is the cynosure of the theme...great!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 12 November 2009

Let us remain free and embrace touch the languages of love let us share anguish with kisses and feel our happiness against the lips And life with you have no words to say... let us enjoy together andremain free and understandthelanguage of love.. thisis wahat is desire of everybody.... lovely poem with passionate thinking...i admireand love its content....10 read mineanywhere..colour...butterfiles aound

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Ranjit Ravindran 10 November 2009

Beautiful...enjoyed each and every expression... Thank you for sharing.

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Ramesh T A 10 November 2009

Nice poem about love's care in distress and happiness!

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Eyan Desir 10 November 2009

A well written poem...but it could of being brush with better metaphors...good job

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Rakesh Bedi 09 November 2009

.....Beautiful poem, lago lago.......

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lily peace lago every by to ph

lily peace lago every by to ph

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