Tuesday, August 24, 2021

And Life Moves On~ Comments

Rating: 5.0

In the darkness of the night
When the moon is playing seek and hide,
And the stars are silent spectators,
The owl twists its neck around,
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M. Asim Nehal
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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 27 August 2021

And the life moves on.....

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 27 August 2021

So true Asim ji. Everyday is a new surprise indeed! Perfectly said

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Kumarmani Mahakul 26 August 2021

The expression made about night is so thrilling and true. Beautiful poem.

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Michael Jack 26 August 2021

It will move on......Nice poem.

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 25 August 2021

Sad, but beautifully imagined.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 25 August 2021

In sleep, some have sweet dreams, The others restless and in pain, Wondering what surprises the new day holds. I have cited your concluding lines. So TRUE!

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 25 August 2021

Wonderful write

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Anjandev Roy 25 August 2021

Excellent write...

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Sylvia Frances Chan 24 August 2021

In sleep, some have sweet dreams, The others restless and in pain, Wondering what surprises the new day holds.Beautifully concluded 5 Stars for this poem I so admired.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 24 August 2021

Beautiful poetic expression. Captivating lines adorned with great images. Yes, life moves on, so rightly said. Top Marks and to my Poem List.

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Ricky Magnathen 24 August 2021

We all keep wondering what surprises the new day holds.

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Mamta S 24 August 2021

Yes it keeps moving no matter what.

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