Tuesday, January 22, 2008

And Just Because... Comments

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Just because she comes off strong,
That doesn't mean she doesn't cry herself to sleep,
Just because she says nothing's wrong,
That doesn't mean she's OK,
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Amber Millar
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Jane Solan-robertson 09 February 2008

Amber, I love that cracks in the pavement line too - you have such insight for someone so young. keep writing always. jane s

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Bill Smith 22 January 2008

Cracks in the pavement are just reminders that no matter how strong you are, Everything falls apart, couple of great lines there, enjoyed smiffy

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