Tuesday, October 7, 2008

*and It Was Her That Made Me Surrender Part 2* Comments

Rating: 2.8

Her taste, what an other worldly pleasure was
All I ever could’ve wished for an unearthly treasure
And it was too me that she surrendered
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Brian Jani 05 May 2014

I like part 2 better

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Anna jonson 07 October 2008

She’s calming me down, soon back on the pavement, Her hand in mine my heart in hers there’s no emotion absent woooooooooooow i like the final part......................goooooooooooooooood poem...maybe the best

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