Friday, April 24, 2009

...And It Was Her Summer Comments

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…And It Was Her Summer


“Go back to the children’s home, she said I have no work and
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Jan Oskar Hansen
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Dr Dillip K Swain 06 June 2021

An excellent write! Touching.... Best

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Chinedu Dike 06 August 2020

A heart-rending story of child abuse told in eloquent finesse. A highly relatable experience. Thanks for sharing.

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alan brown 07 April 2018

a hard life for such a small child. enjoyed reading your work. Oskar Alan

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Abby Sze 14 December 2014

Repeating reading and get to understand more about What happened and feel so bad and hurt about the innocent boy.

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Leah Ayliffe 03 July 2014

This is a terrific illustration. I could imagine everything so vividly in my mind. Awesome write!

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Fred Babbin 18 June 2010

This is more of a story, or a vignette, than a poem. And while my story is much different, your story touched me deeply. I understand the feeling.

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Emma Adamyan 16 July 2009

oh God... its alive movie, yes ur poem is. i could c and feel everything. it was amazing! 10++++++++++++++

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Kesav Easwaran 08 May 2009

i have nothing to offer here as commenting words...why this world remains so bad? touching write...10+

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