And If It's Love Comments

WOW! I could feel the words... So lively and factual. You're a great poet indeed, ma'am!

Great lines that flow with ease of expression. Clouds will pass and over, love shall float. I like this poem

Metaphorical expression sparkles with wonderful comparisons. If it is love, whispers of the breeze kiss the waves and grey clouds swoop across the sky.

If it is love, whispers of the breeze kiss the waves. Gray clouds swoop across the sky. Hold her tight to save the love and its dreams. It is hope when rays of the Sun hit one's eyes. Metaphorical expression sparkles.

The poem is so..o.. sweet. I'll read it again and again

The first few lines are very attractive as the love itself and we have to keep loving! so beautiful!

Love's dream is the souvenir that keeps hope of love ever alive to wipe away tears!