Tuesday, March 6, 2007

And, I Write A Poem Comments

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I write a poem, cross it out
write a song with no melody and hum
to myself and make up a story
where a character steals the sun
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Ben Partenay
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I agree with your title. I enjoy your content. t x

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Karina . 16 March 2007

You are such a great poet! ! like this poem a lot :) -K

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Goldy Locks 14 March 2007

keep on.x dream-keeper. sjg

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Ivan Donn Carswell 13 March 2007

and the World turns to the tunes of the spheres... Well written Ben. Rgds, Ivan

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Alexzia Ferdinand 07 March 2007

what a poetic way to describe writers block benjamin paynter! you're beaten him yet again though....love it

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