Tuesday, December 15, 2009

And I Thought It Was Bad To Fall. Comments

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I fell…
Many years ago
I fell…
Not sure into what I fell,
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Steven SRS
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Kasey Graham 25 June 2010

This poem really touched me. I connected with the joy/suffering with falling. At the same time, felt the sense of stagnation, inability to affect anything. Very nice work.

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Beauty Philosophy 29 December 2009

A beautiful poem portraying a sweet fall...

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Alexia Miles 15 December 2009

I am with you on this one.. Alexia

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Alexia Miles 15 December 2009

I am there with you on that one..Alexia

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