Tuesday, January 13, 2009

And I Think...And I Wonder Comments

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The moon it grows bright as the sky turns to night,
and the stars,
they grow stunningly dim....
and i walk,
...
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Sandra jacks
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Nikia Chesney 13 January 2009

Very good piece. I like how you repeated the beginning in each set of rows. The moon it grows bright as the sky turns to night, and the stars, they grow stunningly dim.... and i walk, and i wonder.... Good job!

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