Friday, October 10, 2008

And I Thank You... Comments

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A young soldier takes a deep breath before battle,
Now millions of miles away from the golden plains and the cattle,
Fearing for his life, and another battle loss,
He closes his eyes, and grips tight on his golden cross.
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Ryan McNicholas
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Rachel Blank 10 October 2008

I've read some of your other poems, and they all have a positive meaning to them. Its kinda hard to see that sometimes now. You really bring out the truth and meaning, inspiration, goodness, etc to things. Great job!

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