And I Shall Sleep. Comments

Such a positive notion, a place of spirituality this sounds like a poem of happiness, being one with self. excellent write

It's awesome.Counting dreams and burning balls of gas, reminded me of lion king, that's neat. Sunlight and starlight lights my empty sockets I smile And I sleep. Yeah, that's got to be my favorite line. Overall it's awesome. Good job. :)

Thanks for the comment Sharon and it means the world to me that my arrangement of words can help you see the things\feel the emoticon that I experianced.

The definition of sadness and peace in the simplicity of poetic language. Call this next line cheesy but I have to say it. I could actually place myself in the situation and actually feel invisible tears pouring out. No joke.