And I Remember That Night........ Comments

Short, but very romantic, nice one.

Like a mystic stroll through an impressionist painting. Light, showers, heat and unspoken emotion all running together like rain on a window pane.....brilliant.10

A beautiful shower of light and rain and unspoken love or is it desire, the lines so thin between them. I wonder if men and women do would sound better than as man and woman does, to keep it in the past tense. However it's your poem so for you to decide but a very enjoyable write. 10/10 BB: O)

The stage so beautifully set For two souls ignited in passion to meet Allowing the readers scope To guess the chance of an elope....(Ha! Ha!) Enjoyed this beautiful shower! !