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Excellent poem! ! ! ! Elegant write! ! ! !

so tender and nostalgic poem you penned down, a caravan wandering in desert to seek the loving eyes............

your poem reminds me of Thomas Hood's poem 'I remember, I remember' - the ever memorable line 'Absent as the rain Still as the desert Loved to read the poem at least thrice at a breath

This is lovely, Reshma. An interesting and original text with some fascinating phrases that impress and delight this reader. 'Your kisses unfurl the tender mornings' 'the ruffled faith like a broken bamboo' are particularly eloquent. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

it is an amazing piece.. wonderful wording.

love comes with loads of pain, Reshma, and you capture some of it here, the greater the love, the more intense, the the greater the pain. And then.. and then love comes in with everest strength and tenderness and all tears float away. This is tremendous, Reshma, moving and absorbing. mark

as far as i know bamboo never breaks...but I guess love can break anything.... beautiful poem Reshma...and congratulations on the launching of your book...consider me there (in spirit) .....

Tears that outlines your eyes Those uneasy whispers You dropped at my foot The splintered warmth From your bosom Even the ruffled faith Like a broken bamboo.....................wonderful imagery of love as expressed by subtlety of metaphors uniquely blended with powerful vibes, yet evocative and ingenious, i do admire,10++++, thanks for sharing

Amazing poem Reshma with imagery to die for! 'you dropped at my foot the splintered warmth from your bosom, even the ruffled faith like a broken bamboo'. I will read your poem over and over......10 love Karin

if it dried like that of the the desert sand....ohhhh Resh.....that is a bad sign :)

And you are far away Absent as the rain Still as the desert Never a sign, nor a word Rachel Ann Butler

Reahma...Congratulations on your publishing.The best of everything for you, young lady! FjR

oh sweet sad! fine phrasology dear reshma! 10+