And I'M Loving It! Comments

lWalk with me, or choose otherwise Be rude to me, or overtly nice; You may join, or just let me be Barely a difference I'm able to see Long roads and deceptive turns- The painful way is how one learns Lub-dub goes my beating heart With the rhythm of the bullock-cart And I am loving it! ......and I am loving it too!

the golden furbish of muse.....(the pen of great talent made it real) Walk with me, or choose otherwise Be rude to me, or overtly nice; You may join, or just let me be Barely a difference I'm able to see

hi! nice one to start with :) I could imagine the scenes what you wanted to show.. nice one realy

Cautiously created images of sound, sight and movement create an impression of the world of flux; and amidst all the I, sensitive and caring. Craft matches art - it is a lovely poem. I expect more. Regards.

I love this poem. To me it's about acceptance of what life has to offer. And you are doing just that and Loving it! Great poem! Marilyn