Thursday, June 10, 2021

And I Keep My Fingers Crossed. Comments

Rating: 5.0

As the thoughts fell word by words from imagination,
On the rocky heart, it started to melt,
Like dewdrop on the rose petal.
The fragrance of love spread quickly,
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Darren Jkoeryo 11 June 2021

Articulate poem. Artistic work with words.

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Michael 11 June 2021

Bravo

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 11 June 2021

Yr words are golden to my ears Bravo!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 11 June 2021

Poetry at its best! Superb imagery. To my Poem List.

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Varsha M 10 June 2021

Sir sometimes waiting is good. Like when waiting for rain but sometimes waiting is not good like if someone is sick procrastinating will only spoil the health.. so, waiting needs critical analysis.

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Zoyza Da Vinka 10 June 2021

All Stars

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Zoyza Da Vinka 10 June 2021

Poetry writing is a difficult art and not all succeed. I am sure your poems are so appealing that some day you will get recognition. A wonderful poem keeping the hope alive.

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