As the thoughts fell word by words from imagination,
On the rocky heart, it started to melt,
Like dewdrop on the rose petal.
The fragrance of love spread quickly,
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Sir sometimes waiting is good. Like when waiting for rain but sometimes waiting is not good like if someone is sick procrastinating will only spoil the health.. so, waiting needs critical analysis.
Poetry writing is a difficult art and not all succeed. I am sure your poems are so appealing that some day you will get recognition. A wonderful poem keeping the hope alive.
Articulate poem. Artistic work with words.