Saturday, August 30, 2008

And I Go On Comments

Rating: 0.0

You spill into my dreams,
Intrude into my days.
You come into my thoughts,
A pause in the cold wind.
...
Read full text

Cordell Rich
COMMENTS
Robert Howard 05 September 2008

Beautifully structured and focused. The memory of a loss enters consciousness as a cold wind. All but the chill fades.

0 0 Reply
Tom Balch 04 September 2008

Short and to the point, well written regards Tom

0 0 Reply
Ivor Hogg 02 September 2008

brief but has a mighty impact

0 0 Reply
Tanya Stanford 30 August 2008

Short, Dramatic and a very impactful piece of poetry. Lovely composition. Felt what the writer was feeling

0 0 Reply
Cordell Rich

Cordell Rich

Afton, Wyoming
Close
Error Success