Wednesday, July 14, 2021

And I Followed The Light ~ Comments

Rating: 5.0

And I followed the light
on my barefoot
As long as I can
but could never get a hold.
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M. Asim Nehal
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Juhaina Tumlu 19 July 2021

Crafty philosophy.

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Zoyza Da Vinka 16 July 2021

Chasing down the drams and mirage not alike. Fabulous poem.

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Chasing the unyielding is life, carry on the hunt with a positive attitude until you understand the futility

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S H 16 July 2021

Wonderful. I liked it.

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I am amused about the word light used here, the two lights, inner and outer and we chase both time and again.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 15 July 2021

Yes, I will go with the first line of your last stanza! A brilliant poem...5 stars.

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Indira Renganathan 15 July 2021

We all know that there is the divine Light in our inner vision...to really find and vision that true Light inwardly is very hard to chase...I too ask like you only....great work...5*****

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Mamta S 15 July 2021

A powerful poem packed in philosophical wrapper. I liked the tone and the words used in your poem.

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Lee Su Pen 14 July 2021

Wonderful and very wise poem. I think if the light and the darkness it can be in one person too is real it is only under space responsibilities. The space is real holder of it we can only make something and need to learn to do what we can

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Ricky Magnathen 14 July 2021

Fantastic poem, out of this world\ I am chasing this light,

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Shreya Hacks 14 July 2021

We all are following the light, who knows till when and for what. Thoughtful poem. Great philosophy of life in simple and lucid manner. Full STARS]

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