And I followed the light
on my barefoot
As long as I can
but could never get a hold.
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Chasing the unyielding is life, carry on the hunt with a positive attitude until you understand the futility
I am amused about the word light used here, the two lights, inner and outer and we chase both time and again.
Yes, I will go with the first line of your last stanza! A brilliant poem...5 stars.
We all know that there is the divine Light in our inner vision...to really find and vision that true Light inwardly is very hard to chase...I too ask like you only....great work...5*****
A powerful poem packed in philosophical wrapper. I liked the tone and the words used in your poem.
Wonderful and very wise poem. I think if the light and the darkness it can be in one person too is real it is only under space responsibilities. The space is real holder of it we can only make something and need to learn to do what we can
We all are following the light, who knows till when and for what. Thoughtful poem. Great philosophy of life in simple and lucid manner. Full STARS]
Crafty philosophy.