I have scratched the loneliness
that never knows its path
Bright as black
I flowed into its waters
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.....And I'm drifting away with your verses....very very unique.Love this poem as well.
Great write, love how the flow..drifts....such a befitting end
A beautiful write, don't we all drift away from reality, from our values, even from life itself... You have opened the door leading to deep thoughts, it's up to each and every one to enter or to walk away!
Beautifully written with a great flow. I am imagining the ice cream is the clouds you are drifting on. Ice cream clouds are the best ones to drift on. I loved this poem. 10 Karin
I love this... especially the ending... like a pendulum...making my mind drift away..smile 10++++ Lovelots, Maia
I Dream to, perchance to write another Poem ZZZZZZZ I like Your Style +10/10 Regards Philip
Great poem Chris, you had me from start to finish. I must read more of your poetry. Ruthie
I like your imaginative writing style. It gives one much to think about.
great write. We all drift from time to time. Tomorrow always keeps calling us into the future. enjoyed this one Chris.