And I Dared To Touch You. Comments
if i touched you, would you bleed?
would you lie writhe in pain.?
would you curse in waves of convulsions?
would you like it?
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Yes the poem has good content and subscribes to an active mind agree with the rhyme 10 Chris
ummm..... cud use some work, try watching the syllables and also try to make every other line ryme, it wudd give it a nice flow, otherwise i like the idea
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7/20/2025 12:34:17 AM # 1.0.0
i love this poems dont need to rhyme or have the same syllables but they need to come from you let your heart flow keep it up 10++