Tuesday, August 5, 2008

And I Ask... Comments

Rating: 4.5

like lettering of letters lettered
in the luminousness out of longing lungs
the blossoming breath of beautiful breeze
ensphered my still soul and in serenade
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Greenwolfe 1962 05 August 2008

This is a most creative writing. I simply loved the word selection. If one is going to play with words, then they should use them in this way. I have admiration for the writer. I would recommend the writer read my poem SOMEWHERE. He may find it enjoyable. GW62

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