Thursday, June 30, 2005

And Hi To You Comments

Rating: 3.6

All the hootin' and tootin'
and the fancy fallutin
only shows that you mock
right from under your rock.
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Mahnaz Zardoust-Ahari 13 September 2005

Nicely put...I don't think I could have said it better!

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Jerry Hughes 03 July 2005

brevity, wonderful brevity, and hi to you too

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Herbert Nehrlich1 30 June 2005

Thanks Lawrence (I think) , but in 820 poems you might find some more basic verse........... Which one did you sacrifice? H

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Lawrence S. Pertillar 30 June 2005

Herbert, this is the first 'basic' verse I have read from you! I like it and it says what you feel. It's not premeditative...like a practiced, lectern delivery! It get's to the point and I guess this is what i've been wanting to see from your writings! We all have 'standards' and I thank you for satisfying one of mine! 'And Hi To You' says quite matter-of-factly to buzz off. If you don't like what's happening here, go annoy someone else! I like this very much!

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