Tuesday, October 13, 2015

And Heaven Cried Comments

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The fountain's gone dry, now withered leaves blow
Down the path where we walked side by side,
Faint echoes still murmur in the wind:
'God is Love'...... but O, how they lied!
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Lora Colon
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Kassem Oude 13 October 2015

Heaven cries When two lovers are torn apart By acts of people or fate severe Widow may new love not restart This next too hard to be sincere.

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Liza Sudina 13 October 2015

Lora! perfectly written! I loved the rhymes so much! such a great feeling! hard to believe that God rranges everything for the better for our souls. and turns all the passions to Himself!

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Ratnakar Mandlik 13 October 2015

You have torn apart the most loving hearts That ever beat under earth's Sun. Very fantastic diction. Thought provoking too. Enjoyed the poem and rhyme too. Thanks for sharing. Ten.

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Lora Colon

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