Tuesday, September 4, 2007

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Strange yet, how we dangle from the slightest shred of hope
Those flimsy gossamer wisps that could not possibly support us
We who love yet are not loved by return
We whose sense deserts us
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Caitlin Hayward-tapp 28 January 2008

This would work really well as a song, I reckon... Remember & slender are very clever rhymes, and the whole mood of the poem, while sad, is very beautiful =]

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