And Eternity Did Not Push Me Away Comments

Thanks rani for this excellant piece. Theme is very good. But you made it very narrative.You do not need so much words to tell the essence.

This is an enjoyable read. The first line got my attention and then the scene was set up. The metaphor of night adds mystery. What you say about the night arouses one’s curiosity. “I can see in the distance /A path that runs between trees” is very inviting for a walk. Right away I had the feel of walking along with you and wondering what would come next. The ending is superb. The journey is delightful with so many action verbs appealing to the senses. Nice use of descriptive adjectives which provide the right kind of feeling: experiencing something yet not everything leaving something more to imagine and think about.

How magickal it must have been to feel that special innerspace.What joy.Love the poem.

Poetry at it's best. Ron

highly insightful thoughts that linger to eternity well brought out, in the poem...very good read 10

life and its tumultuous ways nicely done, the vivid imagery infact makes this journey less mundane

This is the kind of piece I put time aside for, really lovely work 10+ regards Tom

Rani, good work, eternity did not push me away, as always a refined one from you.. mundane world and its worries.....10

wonderful verses...lovely well penned piece....thanks for sharing... Ency Bearis

That was a masterful piece of writing took me away, people can learn a lot from your work and that ever endearing heart thankyou my friend 10 Chris xx

Beautiful and almost other-worldy. Esp. like the goddesses dancing on leaves.. An real ethereal quality to this poem Rani. Enjoyed. HG: -) xx